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You walk in.

I've imagined moments like this.
I've day dreamed of times where we would be in some ubiquitous room,
and we would be alone,
and I would say something romantic,
and you would kiss me like you never did.

You walk by.

I had a real dream that we got married in the sky.
The clouds had been transformed into air balloons,
and your chest started to glow as I said my vows,
and your eyes had stolen the key to the sky
along with all of its electricity on a saturday morning.

You sit down.

Next to me is where I want you to be at night.
I lay in bed, caressing the empty space next to me,
wondering if you think of me as much as I think about you,
knowing the answer is no,
but still entertaining the idea
still playing with the possibilities.

You smile at me.

Those eyes can bring me into another world.
A world where I can hold you as the weather shifts outside,
a world where you are the princess,
and I am the prince, a royal servent.
A world where I can erase the hurt you so carefully hide.
a world where we can both be genuinely happy.

My lips part.

I want to tell you all of this.
About how much I care,
and how much I love you.
I want to tell you how I spend every waking moment thinking about you,
dreaming about you.
The three words swell and inflate in my throat
and flaot up to the gate of my teeth,
forming at the wall of my lips.
I almost yeild to the emotions that
threaten to bring me to one knee,
but my brain is quick to react.
And the only thing that escapes my mouth
is an emotion injected

"Hey."
Just a little something I wrote, bored and frustrated in math class.

I'm not sure how to catergorize it. It was originally a poem, but I decided it was too long to be writwn in that format. Although it'll be the first not poetry format to be put into a poetry folder, but...

I don't know. Its a wolrd of peaches, but we all manage to make applesauce.

EDIT: I decided to put it back into poetry form. It looks a little more...well fed.
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:iconboku-no-sainou:
Boku-no-Sainou Mar 29, 2013
Beautiful. (:
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TheStoyTeller Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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:iconkillinb4killinwaskwl:
Ilove the line, 'Inflate in my throat and float up to the gate my teeth'.I'll never think about speaking the same.
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:iconthestoyteller:
TheStoyTeller Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
haha thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. Its awesome that you could pick out a specific part and to know it made an impact. Thanks again.
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CorporalCornbread Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so, so good... I think that sometimes for girls it's hard to even imagine guys' thoughts when they just say "Hey", but now I guess I'm a bit more clued in <3
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TheStoyTeller Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
haha I figured the same thing, and I don't think she'd ever get this from "hey" but I'm super glad you liked it, thanks for taking the time to read it.
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CorporalCornbread Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure ^.^
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your-oceanic-eyes Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
It's always wonderful to read a poem that reflects your own thoughts perfectly...
This is beautiful. :3 :love:
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TheStoyTeller Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to comment. I'm glad you liked it. :)
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